Crossing Poem by Iniduo Iniduo

Crossing

Rating: 5.0


The call of the other side,
just to be there if only once.
Who does the promise
and keeps waiting for the ferry?

Everyone here is a loner
and the future never comes.
Found a stone out of boredom
thrown into the cold water.

If levees are high above water
the river becomes wide like a sea.
Ships sail by
with no passengers anymore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1.

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