Crucial Elements Poem by Eldin Durant van der Walt

Crucial Elements

Rating: 5.0


Where sun awakens earth
Colourful birth
Adequate water
Recipe le verve

Where wind combs fields
Note afloat
Tantalizing hymn
Hope sails no yield

Where raindrops descend
Heavenly scent
Harmony affair
Snapshots event

Where fire strikes dire
Crucial bliss
Novelty reminder
Followed emerald desire

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Crucial Elements is a personal favourite.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ezra Van Der Walt 26 January 2014

As I read this piece, you made me imagine God creating earth with these incredible sights. The beauty you expressed with the words made me think of how a magnificant picture is being filled with the most amazing colours. Well done!

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Eldin Durant van der Walt

Eldin Durant van der Walt

Johannesburg (South Africa)
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