Crucify Beasts Poem by sekharan pookkat

Crucify Beasts

Rating: 5.0


Beasts never fear
Nor forgive
Or Aggressive
When free they are.

Sharpen their paws
And nails
Waits for the prey
To attack suddenly over them

Fear and fierce
Can do nothing
To brought out truth
In front of law

Courage and firmness
Reproach and contempt
Law and order
Can maintain peace

crucify beasts
When out of cage they are
With iron hands of law
Keeping closer to your hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 02 May 2013

We have the iron fist of law over us only if we do something wrong. If we do not, they have no power over us. We need the law to keep people in line. One law is God's law, which is built into our heart, which is what we think or do, returns to us many fold. Man's law is just to keep people not to go far, which is a difficult task, because the more people want to have order, the more opposition develops. Think about that.

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Poetheart Morgan 18 April 2013

A war btw good and Evil? How many are in cage and deserve be free? We are in jail on our souls, minds so in jail we will like to see the others. Justice? By who? By men? Oh Great Poet, better believe in natural laws of universe. That is final and definitive law. Thanks so much for your feedback on my poem.

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Valsa George 29 March 2013

The beasts that are aggressive, once out of cage can be very dangerous! They should be tied down by the chains of law! You have rightly put it! Thanks for your nice comment on my poem -The Saga of Love!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 10 January 2013

If we learn to follow our feelings, certainly with the already knowledge of politeness, we are like the beast in the wild. Everybody is playing out the law for somebody and if we all try to do goody goody things, instead do our feelings, then it is not right.

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