Cruel Destiny Poem by Michael Vinicio Camacho Menéndez

Cruel Destiny



Cruel destiny that cursed me
To the sky I’m wondering
How could it be?
Without love do I have to live?

One day the sun came into my door
His beauty face made me fall
But In the shadows I got lost
The truth that I ignored

Twice I think I loved someone
But no one ever love me that much
This cruel destiny had been so mean
Putting this curse on me

Spanish, Destino cruel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 07 February 2010

What a pity.........God bless

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Jen Ann Wingfield 06 February 2008

i like this one, this has good flow and rythmn to it. great job!

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Carike Klokow 06 February 2008

I like this one very much!

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Jessica Jemima 06 February 2008

Great poem. I like your use of metaphor. Cool.

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Love is cruel, your verse helps us understand how this can be true. I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

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