Cry Poem by Ketan Hukare

Lovely write....A situation which many people face..

lovely write......dpicts a day to day conditions

All whole of the poem resides in The weeping face that disturbed Many of smiles decent man. Very delicate and a little of D&G, that i love! ! !

cry deeper then tears/well done

Filled with tears of anger and sorrow Disturbing looks of eternity. And eyes watched all unreal Dreaming about past, weeping. Tears...wonderfully expressed sadness and tears...... many images, thoughts and imagination.. thank u. tony

Beautiful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for inviting.

nice poem.Good choice of words.

It expresees some supressed grief, a good read.....some spelling errors need attention

a nice write, some great lines, a few spelling mistakes by the looks of it but great work