Cry For You Poem by Arielle Friese

Cry For You

Rating: 5.0


My saphier eyes
cry for you.

My poor eyes are
tired why do I
cry for you
when you dont
Love me?

I only see you everywhere i look
But i know its not really you.

I've fallen so hard
I cant get back
up

I've dug to far into your heart
and I cant climb out.

So i guess my saphire eyes
will just cry until i can
climb out of your heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 19 November 2011

Beautiful poem, well written, Arielle

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Sweet and sad...nice write... -SG x

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Kara Aleid 09 December 2011

''I've dug to far into your heart and I cant climb out'' I love that part! .. Your So Talented! .

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Vipins Puthooran 16 December 2011

an excellent poem! ! ! ! Express your sadness 'ere! ! ! !

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Devon McElveen 17 December 2011

Wow, this poem has me wanting to write my own sequel, haha, nicely written

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Carlene Sims 30 October 2013

OMG lost of words really like that me look back at relationship I was once in before. Keep up the good work.

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Deep Mukherjee 12 January 2012

your words are the true epitome of pure heart.....good poem! ! !

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Binish Cd 04 January 2012

a realistic expression of love.........ti's good.........

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The 4am Poet Worm 26 December 2011

like a little mermaid...Arielle... :)

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The 4am Poet Worm 26 December 2011

Now this is a beautiful poem...i think maybe if you cry enough you will fill that hole with tears and swim right out :) ....

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