! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *** Cry Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *** Cry Of Innocence ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.3


sparkling dew cries over blade of grass
redeeming slowly by rays golden
mystery shrouds over green of garden
as dawn remembers art of last night

query riffles by nature of resonance
precision happens to happen by bliss
sweetness refluxes by newness of world
soul awes by eclectic cry of innocence

joy resounds mingling into spumes in void
quest lays back into eternity by askance
is there love lost to reason of murky ravine?
as beauty of grace reels up by dreams onshore

soul knows truth of trust by reason implicit
greenness smooches by eyes of grin surmised
heart yet needs warmth of love by craving
moment when chilled by snow in indulgence

yet moment makes history in ages and eons
embracing breaths of love and hatred entwined
into the furrows of days and night intemperate
still we smacks of love resolute in adherence

gleans of love streams in as yet not hurt! !
enlighten soul by divine glory of love sanguine
as quest dies then there by the rain sizzling
like bubbles of queries mingling into obscurity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

cry of innocence so vivid in your words with depth brain storming... uncertain, vagueness still shadowing the dreams.. though seems dead but continue to crawl back to dreams the gleams of love streams..... really a very great write... as always.....showered us with this deep words yet pictured out vividly the thoughts of it... thanks for sharing.... 10++++ lovelots, maia

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Catrina Heart 24 July 2009

sparkling dew cries over blade of grass redeeming slowly by rays golden mystery shrouds over green of garden as dawn remembers art of last night ------- i loved the soft touching mood you have set here sir...Great flow of words woven with fantastic rhymes and diction.....10/10

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Munia Khan 05 October 2009

I won't regret my crying from now on as I have read this poem of yours.....Nice n very very nicely written.10+

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Sumita Datta 20 January 2010

Very rich concept...

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The Lost.. 13 December 2009

ctually all innocences are guilty in most of others' eyes...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Vidi Writes 17 October 2009

Icy reactions, love lost Virtuous dew, dear poet Falls on the grass every day Sparkling rays only momentary Striking day light dries out the moisture. Cries of Innocence forms a cloudy day Only the down pour washes away... the mist. Good read. Re-read. So much is still there is underdstand...

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Tom Steiglitz 15 October 2009

it was a pleasure reading your poem..............10

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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