Crying Fire Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Crying Fire

Rating: 5.0


</>Fire is crying with
Simple voice
In the black smith`s yard
With red crop cutter

Fire is crying with
The Farmer`s lip
And the burning cigar
With the empty stomach

Fire is crying with
The the roof top and the mother
Beside laid the silent son
With the red eye

Fire is crying with
The Launching base
And the scientist`s brain
With the Rocket sky

Fire is Laughing with
The smiling lips of you
Round the clock
with Blessing joy and cool.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 05 February 2009

Excellent write vinu...enjoyed the read...thank you...Fi...10++

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Indira Renganathan 07 February 2009

Wonderful prsentation in simple words...great write10

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Sandra Fowler 07 February 2009

Extraordinary imagery. Reminds me of the fine Chinese poets I read with such pleasure in, 'The World Poets Quarterly'.. Kindest regards, Sandra

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roushan banu 10 February 2009

nice poem...... especially i like the last para.... simple and fire in poem........ 10

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Kesav Easwaran 13 February 2009

your poetic imaginations fire the readers down, Vinod...each stanza holds a seperate image unique and good...10

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The flames of tears are burning liquid fire. Well done my friend.

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 July 2009

great personification sir... well come to think of it. fire is very lively thing indeed! ! ! .. this is very different poem and nice poem indeed..10+ with love shan

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Fire is Laughing with The smiling lips Round the clock with Blessing joy and cool........ beautiful write with eye catching imagination... fire is sour of power and we owe complete existence... what a deep thinking and carefull wording... i loved it....10

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Surya . 04 June 2009

fire is essence of life with so many functions.nice. posted 10 love®ards surya

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Fire is a great theme and love the extremes you have created with your excellent imagery. Karin Anderson

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Vinod Kumar U K

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kannur-kerala-India
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