Vinod Kumar

Rookie (kannur-kerala-India)

Crying Fire - Poem by Vinod Kumar

Fire is crying with
Simple voice
In the black smith`s yard
With red crop cutter

Fire is crying with
The Farmer`s lip
And the burning cigar
With the empty stomach

Fire is crying with
The the roof top and the mother
Beside laid the silent son
With the red eye

Fire is crying with
The Launching base
And the scientist`s brain
With the Rocket sky

Fire is Laughing with
The smiling lips of you
Round the clock
with Blessing joy and cool.


Comments about Crying Fire by Vinod Kumar

  • Silver Star - 4,266 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/4/2011 9:37:00 AM)

    The flames of tears are burning liquid fire. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/4/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    great personification sir... well come to think of it. fire is very lively thing indeed! ! ! ..
    this is very different poem and nice poem indeed..10+
    with love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    Fire is Laughing with
    The smiling lips
    Round the clock
    with Blessing joy and cool........ beautiful write with eye catching imagination... fire is sour of power and we owe complete existence... what a deep thinking and carefull wording... i loved it....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (6/4/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    fire is essence of life with so many functions.nice. posted 10
    love®ards
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (3/17/2009 1:16:00 AM)

    Fire is a great theme and love the extremes you have created with your excellent imagery.
    Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (2/13/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    your poetic imaginations fire the readers down, Vinod...each stanza holds a seperate image unique and good...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie roushan banu (2/10/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    nice poem......
    especially i like the last para....
    simple and fire in poem........
    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (2/7/2009 5:06:00 PM)

    Extraordinary imagery. Reminds me of the fine Chinese poets
    I read with such pleasure in, 'The World Poets Quarterly'..

    Kindest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 498 Points Indira Renganathan (2/7/2009 6:54:00 AM)

    Wonderful prsentation in simple words...great write10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (2/5/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    Excellent write vinu...enjoyed the read...thank you...Fi...10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 13, 2011


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