Petra Soliman

Rookie (April,10,1991)

Crystal Care

I've seen you smile,
I've seen you laugh,
I've seen you cry,
I've seen you angry,
I've seen you hurt,
I've seen you falling apart,
I've seen you shinning,
I've seen it all on your face,
And I've seen your hate against me,
I've seen how your words try to cover the hate in your eyes.

Everyone told me to be careful,
I've been adviced so much against you,
But I never did a thing I knew would hurt you,
Even though I regret that,
Maybe I should of hurt you,
Maybe I should of slapped you,
Maybe I should of messed around with you,
Like how you did with me,
But unfortunately,
My family raised me different than how yours did,
And I'm glad.

The world is coming to an end,
And your busy with drama.
I've tried my best,
But you gave me nothing in the end,
Yet I know I will see the reward soon,
Time shows the truth.

The world is coming to an end,
Maybe thats why im avoiding your drama,
And focusing on whats more important.

The world is coming to an end,
Maybe our friendship wasn't meant to last forever,
But deep down inside me,
My care for you would last forever.

Submitted: Saturday, December 13, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, October 27, 2009

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Comments about this poem (Crystal Care by Petra Soliman )

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (7/29/2010 12:25:00 PM)

    lovely poem with quite meaningful idea...loved it..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kimberly Candace (6/9/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    Sounds like the relationship I was in for 10 yrs. Again you've written another poem that I feel like I wrote myself. Awesome work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (12/13/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    I remember The Rolling Stones singing, you can't always get what you want, but if you try sometime you just migth find you get what you need. Your write is full of the realities of human existence, bitter. The sweet part of it all, what you truly need, will come, as you wisely say. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (12/13/2008 7:51:00 AM)

    Good justified creation, thanks for sharing the touching lines, (Report) Reply

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