Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Cuckoo And The Crow - Poem by Aftab Alam

With my pleasant winged thought, was somewhere?
Cuckoo, the black bird that just sang the sweetest song!
Listened and got hurt, now with unpleasant mind, here
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Comments about Cuckoo And The Crow by Aftab Alam

  • Bronze Star - 2,848 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (5/20/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    Yeah u r right d truth is hard n bitter as u say in yor wondrful poem. Pls do read mine too, im yor fellow indian. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,553 Points Valerie Dohren (5/10/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    The age old story of the cuckoo invading other birds's nests, so true in life.
    A very good sonnet Atfab. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,195 Points Valsa George (5/9/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    The poor crow never knows the truth and it happily nurtures the aliens in its nest! The lazy ones thrive on the sweat and labour of the industrious! Every where there is exploitation! The last two lines contain valid truth! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/7/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    you have a variation on topics of ur poems........
    dis is also a nice 1 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,776 Points Wahab Abdul (5/7/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    i like the way you construct the poem...it is lovely..like it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/7/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    This is an allagory, it is like saying, 'the things people get away with'. Nice poem Aftab. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/6/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    truth is always harsh. good poem. (Report) Reply








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