Cuddles Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Cuddles

Rating: 5.0


As if in a bubble
we exist in this

cuddle

magical
as a child’s delight

alighting delicately on
the edge of the mind

Love forever
blowing bubbles

bubbles

bubbles.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 02 August 2008

Wonderful poem! The poem recall a picture on the bank - a cuddle - lovely image, lovely couple. Your cuddle-bubble seems to be not synthetic, not soap, but a true synergy :) 'Human synergy relates to interacting humans. For example, say person A alone is too short to reach an apple on a tree and person B is too short as well. Once person B sits on the shoulders of person A, they are more than tall enough to reach the apple.' (funny definition of synergy by Wikipedia)

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You two are getting a bit like.... er... two other people I know. Bring it on! t x

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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