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C. P. Sharma (3/3/2010 12:07:00 AM)
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Awesome poem, skilfully crafted with arrow aimed in perfect line. I loved,
And when I do, I'll string my bow,
And line my arrow true.
And then the world will see once more
What Cupid still can do.
Confident ardent love.
CP
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Saadat Tahir (7/16/2009 6:41:00 AM)
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very well written... an ardent wish... less likely granted by providence... ;)
vivid crisp and fresh like the rustling pines
cheers
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Cristy Upshaw (5/29/2009 3:44:00 PM)
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this is so awesome. I love the imagery you have portrayed. your mind of so far beyond mine. such greatness your words leave on pages.
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Laurie Hill (2/6/2009 10:00:00 AM)
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Couldn't you get a ''Gatling'' bow? : 0)
An excellent read
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Catrina Heart (2/4/2009 8:48:00 PM)
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Love is sweeter the second time around...if only given the chance to make things right...How humble you are to admit that you are the one who have to be blamed from the crossed roads that turned you to blue...Truely heartfelt for a great man accepts his mistakes..........beautiful poem written with fine rhymes too...10/10
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Lina Depina (2/1/2009 6:41:00 PM)
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this poem is very well written... i love this poem
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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) (1/22/2009 3:02:00 PM)
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OMG! ! ! ! ! this is my fave of urs so far! ! ! ! keep writing i enjoy it
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Catrina Heart (1/22/2009 10:04:00 AM)
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Great and awesome poem Wolfy! So heartfelt yet written very nicely in a poetic verses...A cupid who wants to have a second chance to coup up all the lost times...Loved it.10+++
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Lynda Robson (1/20/2009 9:10:00 AM)
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Excellent Wolfey, expressive and good rythm,
10
Lynda xx
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