Cupid Needs A Spanking... (Humor) Poem by elysabeth faslund

Cupid Needs A Spanking... (Humor)

Rating: 5.0


That little bitty kid
With the arrow nocked tight
Does far too much damage.

Although the kid's got wings,
A Cherubic, chubby face...
Who trusts a god in Huggies?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue angel Florida 24 September 2007

Cute! .....

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Robert Howard 09 August 2007

What a riot! Kind of takes the old starch out of infatuation.

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Alison Cassidy 25 July 2007

This is delightful. A cartoonists portrait inked with great style and charm. I was watching an ad on the idiot box last night that was sensitively shot and expensively acted with the theme of 'hugs'. Yes, it was an ad for 'huggies' - one of the most polluting 'labour-savers' every invented. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Ivan Donn Carswell 22 July 2007

I belive the term is 'to nock an arrow' - therefore 'arrow nocked tight', however your meaning is clear. The classical reference to cupid has him nude, wherein the need for huggies originates I guess. Love sometimes is like being shat on from a great height... Rgds, Ivan

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elysabeth faslund

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