Cure The Healer Poem by Rana Kashif Zaheer

wow yes it is a poem of its kind thus a comment of its kind nice and warm feeling reading your great masterpiece with spell bounding words and phrases i am going to remember it for ages and it is an immortal piece... thanx VIZARD

@Title: What a dark world that must be where you have to cure the healer... an intriguing title indeed! @Imagery: indicative of thoughts coming directly from the deep ravines of the soul undergoing intense sufferings! @vocabulary: suggestive of a struggle rather some scuffle inside like Tug, whirling away, mistrusted nimble happiness, noxious obstinacy, etc! @Form: looks like a free-verse presented in unrhymed verses, i think there should not be spaces for a better effect, as most of the lines are run-on-lines, @Content: a voice struggling at the intersection of hope and hopelessness, the voice of a sufferer waiting for some help, hope and cure! liked the poem, really! ! !

Dear Poet, Thank you very much for sharing this attempt. To me, this is not an original creation. This is a translation of a poem in Urdu language. More over, the poet has struggled to find words and expressions that would do justice to the theme. well, in any case, what i say is what i feel, not necessarily be an authoritative review. Forgive me for being very open. To me, the art of beauty making has to be a splendid gift, wonderful feast, easy digesting interaction to the enthusiastic mass. Sense is always in struggle with self. self permits none to outshine her. sense tolerates everything, but dictates the absolute truth. if 'poetry is the language of imaginations and passions' as asserted by William Hazlitt, or ' the expression of imaginations' (shelley) rather 'the spontaneous over flow of powerful feelings recollected in tranquility' (William Wordsworth) , request dear Kashif Rana to kindly consider such conventions too when into the art of poetry. God Bless. I am not impressed because, some of the open lines stood offending my humble soul, it seems. Excuse me. Regards, God Bless.

indeed an excellent piece sir, i am blind help me see i can't walk help me run i am deaf help me listen i am a healer help cure myself bravo sir on a master piece

What a masterpiece u have composed Rana, outstanding literary creativity, In first attempt u wrote in such magnificent way, i amazed what u could do when gain experience in this field. Bombastic diction, challenging description and selection of such stratagem theme. fabulous indeed. one suggestion, u should explain ur poem by giving detail in note about poem.. thanks for sharing carry on

Thkx a lot guys. Its all your love. Gratitude.

Bien. Bien! I very much like this poem. Keep writing.

I liked the choices of its words, very lively and poetic I also can feel the emotion that try conveyed in general, I think this is a good work

My favorite couplet in this, Where I can see my despair future? Where everything carved before everything? hmmm if the healer even hurt, then better cure the healer first as sooner it will cure others more.. nice work Rana, keep doing poetry_Soul

I must admit that I know NOTHING about Urdu Poetry, but, I believe that the poet has created an original piece. Everyone interpretts a poem differently - I know that - but maybe you ask what the poet is intending to say before making such a comment. I do not wish to offend; it's just an observation. I like the poem Kashif - as you already know