(d) 5 (Nature) The Wind Is Trying To Tell Me Something Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(d) 5 (Nature) The Wind Is Trying To Tell Me Something

Rating: 5.0


The wind is trying to tell me something
Just softly murmuring and whispering
Gently touching my skin and making me tingle
Breathe in the freshness and let it mingle
Take in the new earth after its been drenched of rain
Ease your minds out of the painful past and all the pain
Sing with the wind resurfacing the music that slowly died
Feel the vibrations of nature's love and not your hurt pride
Sway with the new crop out there in the fields
And not the dagger of your anger that it wields
The rose has wilted but a new bud has arisen
Release the past and let it out from your prison
Life is transient and you may not be able to capture love
But beauty is constant and it will always keep you above

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 12 August 2006

A beautifully uplifting read Tranquil Ocean, Yes beauty is everywhere, we just have to see it. Smiling at you, Tai

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Patricia Gale 12 August 2006

I believe Tai said it all! Beautiful!

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Preeti - is here! 13 August 2006

I love how you're trying to force a change through every poem! This one was just amazing... Preets

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Arti Chopra 15 August 2006

beautiful poem and soft and lovely thoughts..... well done

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Duncan Wyllie 18 August 2006

This is one of the greatest poems I have ever read, and believe me when I say that since being here on poem hunter, I have read many Wow! ! ! I don't know how you did it nor do I need to, only knowing that you did it was enough Amazing Made my day Love duncan X

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Castellenas John 25 March 2019

Gentle, wonderful and amazing poetry for nature. I did enjoy these words.

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Ernestine Northover 30 August 2006

A beautiful poem, written with such a caring hand. Lovely words woven together and a lovely read which was a pleasure. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlet Red 23 August 2006

this is such a great inspirational piece.. i need it badly... keep on writing TO =)

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Will Barber 22 August 2006

A fantastic, flowing song. It reminds me of Swinburne at his best. A great message, too! Inspirational, and beautiful. - Will

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Arti Chopra 20 August 2006

That was simply awesome......u write beautifully and with feeling

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