Dad Is Sun, Mom Is Moon Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Dad Is Sun, Mom Is Moon

Rating: 5.0


the sun
is generous
as dad
in his love
we bask
so bright
and true
the moon
is selfless
as mom
pinning
day and night
to make sure
we shine
crowding
round her
like little stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 09 May 2006

Applause for your spare and elegant poem.. Warm regards, Sandra

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a near perfect poem...lovely indeed and a 10 from me!

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R H 09 May 2006

I love the resounding simplicity of this poem John, really beautiful. Kind regards, Justine.

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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