Daddy Poem by Caitlin Whiley

Daddy

Rating: 5.0


You. Were funny
You were great
When I needed it you
Dished out the money
You drove me around
From place to place
I will never forget your face
All through the
Day all through the night
I will never for get u
Not at all
I also know you would of catched
me when I fall
I love you daddy
Xoxoxo

I miss you so much I think of you every second of the day and every second of the night


I LOVE YOU..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caitlin. w 17 July 2009

Ok.well I'll just leave it as I can't spell or read well..lol Thanks.xox

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Danny H 17 July 2009

I really like this poem, even though it didnt go into depth it showed your pain for someone who you cant see :) hope it gets better and fyi milica franchi for someone telling someone they have spelling errors you cant spell as well, so leave us alone who cant spell for I am one of them :) Spell check is my best friend Lovely poem

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Caitlin. w 17 July 2009

Yeah in 3 years it will as I'm can make my own choice as I'll be 18 ..thanks...yeah I'm in yr 9 n still can't read good or spell good.but I don't care I'll get better one day.. :) . :) .

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Megan Morquecho 18 July 2009

you have a good father cherish him..mine isnt the best in the world he was never around and is hooked on cocain going on 10 years now..

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Caitlin. w 18 July 2009

NO.my dad is not good either he live like 30 min from my house never comes see me never rings me.we. Talk 1 in 2 months. He changed since he remarried..yeah my mum n dad split wen I was 8..

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Caitlin. w 03 November 2009

i dont have a dad.... my teacher dont either -=[ =[ =[ rip

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 July 2009

It is a good God's gift to have a dad.

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Heather Hill 22 July 2009

This was good at least u know ur dad my dad left my mom when i was like born or something like that long story...but you go through can make u stronger u just gotta believe that you can make it...don't worry bout what others thing cuz they dont matter only u do...u gotta stand up and show everyone that ur tougher than they are don't let anyone else tell u otherwise...just remember one thing for sure u are who u make urself to be

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Caitlin. w 19 July 2009

Yeah well I just wish he know how hurt I am... I'm not good at rightin poems.. Cheers caitlin

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Patrick A. Martin 19 July 2009

i know this sound tough but u can't change yr dad but u can change u sweetheart u have to get on with yr life and hey you have a gift for writing get into it. I like your ryheme it rocks,

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