Daddy Hits Mummy Poem by Emmanuel Odum

Daddy Hits Mummy



A song in married home
like tiddens in the blue
the turn of lively hope
the marriage creed they blew

sudden crack, assunder
a force in worried head
like trashing bolts of thunder
the torch of tender dead

Alligations do arise
at the dawn of full fault
the lucky throw of dice
two maggots in a vault

A very chance he strike
in stabbing pain she moan
thier feeling go beserk
as daddy hits mum.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samuel Nze 08 June 2008

Barring slight grammatical hiccups, I dare say this poem is a mini masterpiece. Good work, Odum!

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Subbaraman N V 18 January 2008

Most unfortunate! One must understand and appreciate the other or else life will be miserable! God bless them!

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