Daddy Listen Poem by Destiny Vancil

Daddy Listen

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I want you to do something very
simple for me dad...I want you
listen to me...becuase this is
to you and this is the last... Dad I want you to
realize how bad it hurts to know
that i cant call for my daddy
when i get an owie on my knee and how
much pain you have cuased me and my sisters
I want you know how hard it is
to wake up and see little girls
with there fathers... and I want you to
know you have lost yours...
I want you to know how difficult it is to see
my friends say' i love you daddy'
at night when all i can do is listen to
a voice on the other line twice a week
...I want you to know
that i couldnt stand going to
sleep at night knowing that you
might not be there the next day
and that you could be lying in
a ditch somewhere becuz you didnt
pay for your drugs...
daddy i want you to know
I'm broken and ruined Becuz of you...Im still
worried that when you get out you might go back
to the monster that brought us here in the
1st place...I want you to know you have lost
your little dusty lou...i want you to realize
that im not yours anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Fisher 06 March 2009

I feel your pain but at least you had friends me growing up I had drugs alcohol and this alter ego talking to me named kiza look don't ever be sad over a lost one whether they be in jail, prison, on the street, or worse remember even not having a father can be a good thing if you replace it with friends, family, and a lover find your light or you will be trap in eternal darkness like me

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Scott Austin 12 February 2009

Your sadness and pain are felt in these words you have expressed in this write...You must know that drugs are addiction/ sickness and your daddy needs help but no one can help him until him wants it...try to remember the good times not the bad times you had with him...keep your head up and may you find the peace and joy you seek deep within your heart. Scott

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