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Reshma Ramesh

Rookie (20th April / Bangalore, India)

*'Daddy's Darling*


She blew five candles
On her cake, angel
In a pink dress, hair
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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/7/2008 12:12:00 AM)

    dear luke,
    i have written about other beautiful things in life too u will notice if you read my poems...but i cant leave these things alone when it is so rampant......if we don't wake up...who will? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (10/6/2008 11:57:00 PM)

    things like these get my heart gaping wide for those poor little souls lost in their own little worlds, for those souls who don't know right from wrong, the little kids whos ask themselves is this what fathers and brothers do? am i the reason my father left me and my mother all alone? it makes me furious to know that that's what's happening in the world, people in our neighborhood, people right next door. it's heartbreaking, they deserve a loving home, a real home not a house.. they need a place to rest their broken hearts and souls.. they need you, they need me, .. they need anyone with and open heart and mind.. great poem.. i was breathless, heartbroken.. ~Love Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Er.(dr.) Pradeep Kumar Mohanty (10/6/2008 11:55:00 PM)

    Though I liked it, somehow i am scared 2 comment. Lets write something spiritual and divine, which will refine our soul. Regards- Pradeep
    By the way what u do? Study or job? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 780 Points Jerry Hughes (10/6/2008 11:34:00 PM)

    Particularly pleased to know you weren't the vicitim Reshma, of this brutally frank and revealing piece. Warmly & fondly, Jerry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (10/6/2008 11:25:00 PM)

    We are slowly slipping into Satanic domain.........a much needed subject u have dealt with.....................keep taking up such things. A poet has social responsibility. When he flays social evils then only his fulfilment.......well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Seema Chowdhury (10/6/2008 11:14:00 PM)

    these are very difficult topics to discuss in open, but they are bitter realities of life.
    may God protect all the girls and keep them under his shade of bliss. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anjali Sinha (10/6/2008 10:51:00 PM)

    incest-a topic very
    hard to digest-
    resh i must say u were
    daring to bring out this
    in your monologue.
    nicely penned +10
    anjali
    (do read my raindrops) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (10/6/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    Very well written poem. Interesting topic that you've shed some light upon.
    Hugs,
    dee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Ency Bearis (10/6/2008 10:36:00 PM)

    a nice advocate against those abusers....
    I don't know why there are person living in this world
    such atrocity is intolerable and will be out of society
    wonderful poem..nicely narrated....

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shimon Weinroth (10/6/2008 10:30:00 PM)

    courageous to deal with incest a subject both taboo and too often swept under the rug, in different societies there is too often a tolerance and blind eye,10 twice for two reasons both content and the sudden peripity from warm love to horrible exploitation, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (10/6/2008 9:58:00 PM)

    lost childhood, house of horrors- i feel chilhood is no longer a care free time of life. children every where are suffering due to negligence or preoccupied parents. they suffer silently, in deep anguish or give in to aggression- hence the turmoil in society. a vey moving piece.

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stacey Watts (10/6/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    What a very emotional piece. It brought tears in my eyes. This is a very powerful piece. Very emotional sad piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (10/6/2008 9:31:00 PM)

    Dear Reshma, I am emotionally shattered. Make it a media report not a poem. I am so sad that ---. Devils are there always. They are not dad or brother.They do not what is a sacred and divine relationship. Edit it for further improvement. You do not say everything.Let the readers feel it in their heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (10/6/2008 9:21:00 PM)

    Very well writen.
    I also have poems that I wrote about child abuse.
    I know people that had been abussed sexualy.
    One of them comitted suiced in October 19 th 10 years last year this year will be his 11 year of his death. Martin Arnold cruz. Martin Arnold Cruz junped of the Broadview Bridge here in Toronto, he was 18 that time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/6/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    Sensitive write on a sensitive subject...but these things...aberrations perverse rare...can never be generalized...the write has good poetic elements in it, though... (Report) Reply

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