Daddy's Little Defect Poem by Kayla Corinne Beneteau

Daddy's Little Defect

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Daddy's little girl,
so innocent and profound,
so sweet as sugar,
but behind the mask is where the enemy lays,
deep deep down she wants to cry,
her drug addiction out of control,
her arms hidden,
her life has taken its toll,
as she lays her head to sleep,
through the closet door her demons will creep,
she closes her eyes tightly,
and gasps for air,
she cannot breath,
with her last breath she wishes on the brightest star,
'help me please'
she lives no more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajinder Singh 01 February 2010

you have to fight your own battles others can only support you.Be strong

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Wow, that's really deep stuff. I can tell you reached deep within yourself to write that. And I know it's not easy to admit things like that. Great poem though, it flows really well.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 02 September 2008

very touching! keep writing! I like the words, 'help me please', she lives no more. could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones?

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