Is It Poetry

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Daffodils - Poem by Is It Poetry

She doesn't mind the great length
or the girth of it.
Bushes without leaves
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Comments about Daffodils by Is It Poetry

  • Gold Star - 5,090 Points Darlene Walsh (8/12/2015 6:43:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. And as Bri mentions, it does have a strongly hinted sensual quality to it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,214 Points Bri Edwards (8/2/2015 4:07:00 PM)

    a month later i read KK's comment (below) . allium? you must have changed the photo since he saw it, he's joking, or his eyes are not good. i don't think he would lie!

    i like the poem, especially for the rhythm and rhyme (and photo) . a few typos i'll excuse, but if you care to discuss them or just ask/tell me to change them in the August showcase [where i've put this poem] let me know.

    i at first thought this might be a disguised sex poem. i'm still not sure.
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    this is interesting and will probably get some people thinking, but i left my thinking cap in another state, so this part is TOO DEEP for ME! :

    The woods
    are not deep without tree's
    that are seen.

    thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,249 Points Kelly Kurt (7/2/2015 11:20:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, but the field of allium photo kinda threw me.
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply








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