Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 125 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Dancing with the stars

On a clear starry night,
I was cordially invited
To a celestial party
Where my presence was a must
And of course, I gladly attended…

In this exciting party,
I was honored to dance
With all the beautiful stars
While the angels
Happily played
In the background!

Time passed rapidly
And we were having so much fun
But I notice that the Moon
Was completely possessed
By a rage of jealousy
Since she wanted to dance with me!

Politely, I excused myself
From all the stars
And I started to dance with her!
We danced all night long
Until the Sun arrived
And with a big and bright smile
She said to me: 'What a party',
Which I replied: 'Darling, you are right'
'Let's do it again another night'

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Submitted: Saturday, October 13, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012

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Dedicated with all my heart to the woman of my dream E.R.A

Comments about this poem (Dancing with the stars by Romeo Della Valle )

  • Bronze Star - 2,287 Points Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:16:00 PM)

    Moon struck dancing angels and stars its got it all, imagination has a fling as only you can bring Romeo...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (10/20/2012 8:01:00 AM)

    Great imagination, you paint a wonderful picture with your words, inspired write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 291 Points Marilyn Lott (10/19/2012 7:56:00 PM)

    Truly beautiful and touching. Yes, you have described the dream most everyone has. You talked straight to your readers. Very well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 83 Points Norman Hale (10/18/2012 1:06:00 AM)

    here i wrote a start of a poem that this one inspired i later changed it hope you enjoy

    May you find love tomorrow
    As you pass it on the street
    And may true love find you
    As you melt at each others feet

    May love feel your hearts
    You'll know it was a Heaven send
    May that someone you find
    End up being your best friend

    May you find love tommorow
    And you hold each others hands
    As each day passes you by
    Like tiny grains of sands

    May true love find you
    May you know it from the start
    As it forever burns
    And always fills your heart

    May love guide you
    And remove any doubts
    May it run just as pure
    As fresh water from the spout

    May God guide you both
    Right to the Pearly Gate
    And may He then pronounce
    You are forever soul mates

    written 10/16/2012 by Norman Hale Jr. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Onyeme John (10/17/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    You've taken me there already with this poem. I can see the stars too, glittering more happiness to my heart. Please more of this imagination. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 83 Points Norman Hale (10/16/2012 5:57:00 PM)

    may you find her tomorrow
    as you pass her on the street
    and may true love find you
    as you melt at each others feet (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (10/15/2012 8:32:00 AM)

    Superb poem, Romeo. Love it.
    Tonight I will attend the party
    Fantastic (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,206 Points Ramesh Rai (10/15/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this beautiful poem as if i am also dancing with all the stars on the celestial stage. wonderful imagination brother. May god bless you to write more and more. regards, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Angel Lockwood (10/14/2012 10:02:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed dancing with the stars. It is BEAUTIFUL. I went on a journey while reading!
    Love it! Bravo! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/14/2012 5:28:00 PM)

    that is not celestial but so human and on your way, again, so poetic! ! ! Dance with the moon! ! ! Beatiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 395 Points Ency Bearis (10/13/2012 9:40:00 PM)

    wonderful celestial affair rendered splendidly, nice write (Report) Reply

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