Dancing With The Stars Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Dancing With The Stars

Rating: 4.9


On a clear starry night,
I was cordially invited
To a celestial party
Where my presence was a must
And of course, I gladly attended…

In this exciting party,
I was honored to dance
With all the beautiful stars
While the angels
Happily played
In the background!

Time passed rapidly
And we were having so much fun
But I notice that the Moon
Was completely possessed
By a rage of jealousy
Since she wanted to dance with me!

Politely, I excused myself
From all the stars
And I started to dance with her!
We danced all night long
Until the Sun arrived
And with a big and bright smile
She said to me: 'What a party',
Which I replied: 'Darling, you are right'
'Let's do it again another night'


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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated with all my heart to the woman of my dream E.R.A
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 13 October 2012

wonderful celestial affair rendered splendidly, nice write

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Poetheart Morgan 14 October 2012

that is not celestial but so human and on your way, again, so poetic! ! ! Dance with the moon! ! ! Beatiful! ! !

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Angel Lockwood 14 October 2012

I really enjoyed dancing with the stars. It is BEAUTIFUL. I went on a journey while reading! Love it! Bravo! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2012

I really enjoyed this beautiful poem as if i am also dancing with all the stars on the celestial stage. wonderful imagination brother. May god bless you to write more and more. regards,

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Hans Vr 15 October 2012

Superb poem, Romeo. Love it. Tonight I will attend the party Fantastic

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Ken E Hall 23 October 2012

Moon struck dancing angels and stars its got it all, imagination has a fling as only you can bring Romeo...regards

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Hazel Durham 20 October 2012

Great imagination, you paint a wonderful picture with your words, inspired write!

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Marilyn Lott 19 October 2012

Truly beautiful and touching. Yes, you have described the dream most everyone has. You talked straight to your readers. Very well done!

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Onyeme John 17 October 2012

You've taken me there already with this poem. I can see the stars too, glittering more happiness to my heart. Please more of this imagination. Thanks

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Norman Hale 16 October 2012

may you find her tomorrow as you pass her on the street and may true love find you as you melt at each others feet

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