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Dandelion

Hush the sky breath
Wind spread cotton wings
White and light
And it's you try to fly
Away from this ground
A field of dandelions

You traveling by the air
With the emotions there
A will to find a strength
Before grow as a new dandelion
I know u will be a brave one
Time to discover earth in your lifetime
Brave just like other dandelion

Great to know you will be fine
Cause i hope u always fine
Forbidden line is not exist
You free across the mist
At least for you, dandelion
Flying freely and not afraid
The choice you take
It's not wrong to be brave
I know one day you will find a place
Somewhere for you growing strong and flowering grace
Perhaps we don't know where but you deserve something
Like dancing in the air you will cheer with happiness
There's still a long journey
Before a seed to find a site
A basement to grow
Taller and restart great life,
Bear everything all bright

Just like other dandelions
Traveling surround you mystery
Nobody wanted or invite hurt
In the journey if it comes
Forget not poison comes with remedy
O Friend make easy stand
Close friend will never end
Understanding is the sand
For you dandelion growing strength
White wings make beautiful land
It's been a while but i know
One day you will travel far from here

We will always keep in touch
That not much what u ask but it is a must
Because you my friend is not like a dust
To left and ignore after the past
Sometimes hello dont need a bye
But now you must fly and chase your dream
As friend always be there and understand
Without hands to hold or eyes to see
and i am glad u know i always there
and i always be there

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Originally written for a friend, it was long time not read
but it's time for me to share with all...As i know our life
sometimes like a dandelion we have will to fly/got to leave,
Finding the best ground to restart life with more passion.
Life could be hard but i think we can learn from the dandelions
never give up, as we keep fly with small wings before
find a land we desired...a dream will come true but
time will tell when...
If you have a dream, be brave to land the dream :)

This not using friendship as the main theme (even it was included) but it more on a wish of a dream to land a future..
wherever you are life is always created for you, everyone deserves it
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Submitted: Monday, September 05, 2011
Edited: Saturday, March 16, 2013


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  • Frank James Davis (4/15/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    Your own Theme notes are this poem's best review.
    Dandelions will now always seem enchanted to me.
    Outstanding work, Soul!

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  • Poetheart (going) (12/14/2012 6:28:00 AM)

    Dreams are to be come true. When you meet your dreams on reality, so you become brave.

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  • * Sunprincess * (12/9/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    i agree with captain your poems are wonderful and
    i especially love the poet's notes on this one..fabulous

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  • Walterrean Salley (8/13/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    Very delightful. Gives hope and inspiration to all.

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  • Captain Cur (6/24/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    Whenever I am down in the dredges and need a kind hand
    to pull me out of the hold of despair, I turn to one of your
    magical poems and my spirit soars again. Beautiful write.

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  • Elena Sandu (5/13/2012 9:45:00 PM)

    There's still a long journey
    Before a seed to find a site
    A basement to grow
    Taller and restart great life,
    Bear everything all bright
    How much my soul loves those words! ! I can feel my whole being as such flower, my body to earth tied, my spirit yet to fly like a dandelion clock to spread its love! Inspiring, great write.Thank you!

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (4/14/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    A great tribute to your friend.

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  • Shadow Girl (10/21/2011 10:48:00 PM)

    I love this...so metaphorical, so sweet, so perfectly written..a joy to read some deep and profound thoughts in here...loved it!

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  • Patti Masterman (10/10/2011 10:02:00 AM)

    I know that you have a huge heart. I suspected it from the very first. This writing shows your heart to the world so perfectly. I'm very happy to know you here, Soul. :)

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  • Amir Forougi (10/2/2011 2:44:00 AM)

    High strings of imaginations flying around your mind...Brilliant and shocking deductions of humor and tragedy

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