Treasure Island

Valerie Dohren

(13 January 1947 / Southport)

Dappled Gold


There they lie ‘neath silver clouds
Dappled gold, dappled gold,
Wrapped in iridescent shrouds
Oh so cold, oh so cold.

Run your fingers through the sand
Damp with tears, damp with tears,
Try to reach them, hold their hand
Quell their fears, quell their fears.

Do we dare to speak their name
Whisper low, whisper low,
Close your eyes and feel their pain
Let them go, let them go.

There beneath the moon above
Don’t you cry, don’t you cry,
Feel their never ending love
As you sigh, as you sigh.

Submitted: Tuesday, December 03, 2013

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  • Payal Parande (8/17/2014 7:36:00 PM)

    each time i read your poem i fall in love with them more and more, you are so brilliant and the emotions you bring with them are so deep and so calmly expressed i am just speechless ma'am you are just brilliant and so beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Patrick (1/15/2014 2:25:00 PM)

    If Sandy Denny were alive today I could just picture her singing something like this, magical. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/9/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    Stunning write full of memories to hold and treasure, dappled gold forever in your heart. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/7/2013 6:12:00 PM)

    I can feel your heartache in these golden words. Words so angelic. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (12/6/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. You write so well of the lost soul, the lost love, youo put into words what all of us have felt at times. Thanks for sharing 10/10 BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo (12/5/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    Val.... as always, you wrote a beautiful poem, that should be a song! ~ So sad and moving,
    and felt right in the heart., A masterpiece that moves you to tears. Thank you.{{{hugs}}} (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (12/5/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    The streaks of clouds will rain over, the beams of the sun will descend on ever and your memories may never fade out Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (12/4/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    dear val, when you love someone so strongly it is okay to cry...
    if I was there, you I would hug if I saw tears come from your eye
    and if I lost any of my beloved friends on ph I would cry, maybe even die
    and dear poetess, thank you for writing this beautiful poem :) (Report) Reply

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