Dard... Poem by abhilasha bhatt

Dard...

Rating: 5.0

Ye tanhai jo faaili hai door tak
Mere ujde hue nakshon ka sabab hai ek
Ye teeke teer se bhede shabdon ka guldasta hai
Jinki kamaan geron k Nhi apnon k hathon main hi thi
Tiraskar shor se
Taanakasi purzor se
Jane Kbtk kahan tak ye silsila chalega...

Thursday, December 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 December 2015

Pain is wisely narrated in this poem. Very amazing sharing done definitely.10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 31 December 2015

Thank you sir...nd a very happy new year :)

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Rajnish Manga 31 December 2015

दर्द और तन्हाई का एक लंबा सिलसिला जो दूर तक फैला रहा, हमारी दुआ है कि आज इसी जगह थम जाये. कल से शुरू होने वाला नया साल नई उम्मीदों, नए ख्व़ाब और नई खुशियों के दिलकश सिलसिले ले कर आये. धन्यवाद.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 31 December 2015

Happy new year sir... :)

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Rishi Thakkar 04 January 2016

Kuch atoot Saa sambandh hai dard aur zindigi ka.. Jaise mano ek kavi se kalam syahi ka.. Khushiya to khudgarz hoti hai sabse baat sakte hai Dard khaas aur dil k kareeb jo ho mehsus kar sakta hai..

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Savita Tyagi 19 January 2018

बहुत सुन्दर और क़ाबिले तारीफ़ ग़ज़ल है। Thanks for sharing.

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Mithilesh Yadav 24 November 2016

janey kab tk ye silsila chalega..... grrtttt............... thanx for sharing

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Souren Mondal 16 February 2016

A very impressive write Abhilasha.. Wonderful - :)

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

Impressive and touching, it's pain when felt inspires to write such amazing lines.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 31 January 2016

The life itself is a pain with sorrow and good poem.

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