Dare We Forget? Poem by Fay Slimm

Dare We Forget?

Rating: 5.0


I catch somehow
The view of inside tears.
In eyes that peer behind
That furrowed brow.

Behind the smile
Bravely shown for camera
Lens, there the pretence ends
As, all the while

Endless red dust
Surrounds the sound of home
Falling, wall by broken wall.
But smile she must.

Homeless now, with
Age-old grit she sits, aware
Her world has stopped.
Another bomb
In error, dropped.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 09 September 2008

Faye, this is a wonderful poem. It is beautifully penned and the content tugs at my heart and brings a tear or two. Ron

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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2008

Extraordinary. You have painted a memorable poem picture. This one has my applause. As always, Sandra

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Don Pearson 16 September 2008

This made my hair stand on end. Similar in purpose to my TeignmouthNews but much better expressed. Thanks. Don

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David Threadgold 13 September 2008

Hi Fay How could we forget when you bring the memories so cleverly back to mind. Well done Regards Dave T. **10** definately

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Susan Jarvis 11 September 2008

A clever title, a poignant message. Exceptionally well penned. S: (

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Bob Blackwell 09 September 2008

Fay lots of feeling here Fay, I read it slow and the hurt came through. To many bombs dropped in error, no feeling there. Bob

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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