Dark And Gloomy Poem by Marilyn White

Dark And Gloomy



Outside my window
No more sun just rain
And it is September
Just like the time before
But this time you will not
See me I December I will be gone
Broken promises hearts dreams
Just like the homes we live in
Now I know there is no such
Thing as a meant to be
A happy ever after
Your other half soul mate
I will never know what it is like
To know what forever love
Is because I live in black world
So wake me up when it is over
I will see what there is to see
The thing of what it is like
Tomorrow will never come back
I will never the same as I was

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fil LeBoeuf 25 September 2006

Your use of capitalization at the beginning of lines which continue from a previous line makes it difficult on the reader. Simple lower cases would make this poem much stronger. I know you hate me, but it's true. ~Fil

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Leo Lopes 17 September 2006

Hey i love your work Marilyn especially this line: ' And it is September Just like the time before But this time you will not See me I December I will be gone' Nice and tragic which i like Ciao ciao

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