Dark Caverns Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

I LIKED THIS A WHOLE BUNCH. Great Work

this is dark and mysteroius i like it! -ryan

dark caverns a deep dark exploration! beau

i loved this one............sir...as always... a great write

Great! I know exactly what your saying. I praise God I never have to be afraid of those dark caverns, I know this from experience. Know matter what temptation you do (and will) fall only proves it right. [There is pleasure in sin, but only for a season.]

I like this poem it shows strength and passion

In a few words you capture what's in store for the hero of the myths when he begins his life's quest.

We shall never fear of darkness for there's a light beam in our heart If the we're meant to take the trial It's time to see how strong we are.....

i like this one it reminds thanks for sharing

Vivid imagery painted on canvas of tranquility...........triumph against dark evils...spelled out like hundreds mazes.............need a peace of mind to crack the meaning beneath the caverns of mind.Excellent writes my buddy Colin.I'll read more of your powerful poetry soon.Keep up the good work! ! your new buddy, Dean Nordy, US of A.