kyle potter


Dark Dark Girl - Poem by kyle potter

Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
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Comments about Dark Dark Girl by kyle potter

  • Rookie - 23 Points Umar Kabir (4/3/2015 6:22:00 PM)

    I absolutely love the last line (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Umar Kabir (4/3/2015 6:21:00 PM)

    i absolutely love the final line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points melanie stinnett (1/12/2015 1:31:00 AM)

    I love this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Crystal Martin (8/28/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    i can definetly relate im like the dark girl but there is no light for me good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dragon Crenshaw (11/28/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS REALLY GOOD POEM REALLY GOOD (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessee Bennett (11/2/2012 12:19:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. Its one of the ones that is simpal but elagant. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Savano Istork (10/3/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. It's one of my favorite poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aya Kishiko (9/1/2011 4:27:00 PM)

    It should be LIGHT girl.. negative poems are all over in here - it's good to express your feelings, but isn't it tiring? ..^_^..pfufufu.try to smile and enjoy life once in a while. fighting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cleide Tatyana Almeida (6/3/2010 1:48:00 PM)

    One word; well actually I need to write over twenty characters apparently. Now that I've done that, here's the word: AWESOME! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kyle Potter (4/26/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    thank you, i had a lot of fun writing it about my friend that hated the poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mackenzy Edmonds (4/26/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    its so amazing i luv it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jamie Stone (12/16/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    I love this, there is so much feeling in it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/23/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    i like it nice work ++10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gold Fish (10/12/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    A dark poem brought into the light. I enjoyed this poem about the dark dark girl. It was quite clever, witty, and a nice read I might add. Sorrow, Sadness, Hopelessness, Suicide, Death, Happiness, Acceptance, Pain – you encompass this and much more in this short, intense little poem of yours. You’ve done a good job Kyle. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

    Feel free to read some of my poems:

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/matthew-de-gasperi/ (Report) Reply










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