fade ward


Dark Rose - Poem by fade ward

a dark rose growing from the dark
concrete crevice of
this deserted building
on this dark night
spreading its petals of darkness
for a dreamer dark dream


on a fine morning
when the darkness
is gone
the dark rose
comes out in the open
to meet the sun
to embrace it’s light
with so much light
turning into something
of a reddish blood
coloured rose
something glowing like
the blood of pain
but still dark
like the one last night.


Comments about Dark Rose by fade ward

  • Rookie Danielle Guscott (7/1/2009 1:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I love it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Arabian Heart (6/25/2009 4:44:00 AM)

    A rose that falls or grows
    A bloom tat taints your essence
    A rise that call
    Fight for the nutrients for all
    And fight the pain until the lights shine for powerful

    A rose for you for letting me read your wonderful words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dragon Thunder (6/12/2009 7:36:00 AM)

    nice poem great words for a great poet give ya a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (6/12/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    dark rose shines when the sun rise great words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/8/2009 1:17:00 AM)

    a fine poem with many enchanting words..like it..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/7/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    Such a great imagery you have put here in a short yet lovely piece...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/5/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    Dark represent no gloom or pain. every flower greet the sun to boom. good write....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rory Hudson (6/5/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    Good work. I didn't like the repetition in it at first, but it grew on me, and on reflection I think it works. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 5, 2009



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