Dark Rose Poem by fade ward

Dark Rose

Rating: 5.0


a dark rose growing from the dark
concrete crevice of
this deserted building
on this dark night
spreading its petals of darkness
for a dreamer dark dream


on a fine morning
when the darkness
is gone
the dark rose
comes out in the open
to meet the sun
to embrace it’s light
with so much light
turning into something
of a reddish blood
coloured rose
something glowing like
the blood of pain
but still dark
like the one last night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 05 June 2009

Good work. I didn't like the repetition in it at first, but it grew on me, and on reflection I think it works.

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Dark represent no gloom or pain. every flower greet the sun to boom. good write....10

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Catrina Heart 07 June 2009

Such a great imagery you have put here in a short yet lovely piece...10+

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Danielle Guscott 01 July 2009

Beautiful. I love it.

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Arabian Heart 25 June 2009

A rose that falls or grows A bloom tat taints your essence A rise that call Fight for the nutrients for all And fight the pain until the lights shine for powerful A rose for you for letting me read your wonderful words

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Dragon Thunder 12 June 2009

nice poem great words for a great poet give ya a 10

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Akram Saqib 12 June 2009

dark rose shines when the sun rise great words

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

a fine poem with many enchanting words..like it..grace

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