Treasure Island

Linda Ori

(08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' DARK SURRENDER


The night wind moans uneasy
As dying embers leap,
Somnolence enveloping
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  • Jim Hogg (12/13/2011 4:30:00 PM)

    You're a very naughty girl Linda Ori! But of course you were only thinking of the metre and rhyme when you were writing this...never lingering for a moment on the content... ... spell.. binding as always! X (Report) Reply

  • Yelena M. (11/11/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Darkness pervades your poem, and yet there is some immaculate beauty in it. Loved the flow, thanks for sharing, Linda.
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • David Scott (11/7/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    Ahh, I came across this one a week too late. Oh well, I still see remnants of Halloween around me, so it's better late than never. Great writing, Linda! (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (10/28/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    This is exquisite. To some of us (both under and over the age of 40) this is more real
    than imaginary. Love this style and the bewitchment of the words. (smile) (Report) Reply

  • Scarlett Treat (10/28/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    When I read this on forum, I just had to come here and add it to 'my favorites' and vote it a 10, for I think it is a truly good piece of scary, bone-chilling fear! ! Well done! ! (Report) Reply

  • David Harris (10/28/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Linda, what a wonderful gripping poem. Your words just drove me on to read this piece. Top marks plus and thanks for sharing it with us my friend.
    Hugs David Happy Halloween. (Report) Reply

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