Linda Ori

Rookie - 137 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' Dark Surrender - Poem by Linda Ori

The night wind moans uneasy
As dying embers leap,
Somnolence enveloping
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Comments about ' Dark Surrender by Linda Ori

  • Rookie - 441 Points Jim Hogg (12/13/2011 4:30:00 PM)

    You're a very naughty girl Linda Ori! But of course you were only thinking of the metre and rhyme when you were writing this...never lingering for a moment on the content... ... spell.. binding as always! X (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Yelena M. (11/11/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Darkness pervades your poem, and yet there is some immaculate beauty in it. Loved the flow, thanks for sharing, Linda.
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Scott (11/7/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    Ahh, I came across this one a week too late. Oh well, I still see remnants of Halloween around me, so it's better late than never. Great writing, Linda! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 787 Points Patti Masterman (10/28/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    This is exquisite. To some of us (both under and over the age of 40) this is more real
    than imaginary. Love this style and the bewitchment of the words. (smile) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (10/28/2009 3:33:00 PM)

    A surprising poem from you! Yet it is interesting to the end! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Kempson (10/28/2009 2:14:00 PM)

    Yes read it on the forum so good thanks Daniel 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Scarlett Treat (10/28/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    When I read this on forum, I just had to come here and add it to 'my favorites' and vote it a 10, for I think it is a truly good piece of scary, bone-chilling fear! ! Well done! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,137 Points David Harris (10/28/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Linda, what a wonderful gripping poem. Your words just drove me on to read this piece. Top marks plus and thanks for sharing it with us my friend.
    Hugs David Happy Halloween. (Report) Reply

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