Darker Than Amber Poem by David Harris

Darker Than Amber

Rating: 5.0


Her eyes were
much darker than amber
as she beckoned to me
to come to her open arms
and live within them
for all eternity.

16 June 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 June 2008

Never have so few words said so much... Andy 10

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Ernestine Northover 17 June 2008

A great statement David, so much said in so few lines. Very moving piece of writing. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XX

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Scarlett Treat 17 June 2008

It's shortness only left me wanting MORE! Beautiful! !

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Fred Babbin 17 June 2008

I could not resist the simplicity of this poem. It says so much in so few words.

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David Harris

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Bradfield, England
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