Darkness Poem by darkpuppet loveless
Darkness
it slowly creeps into my head,
slowly but surely,
choking the light,
forcing it to retreat,
I stand alone in my sea of thoughts,
in blank darkness,
hoping the light will return
Your comin out from a tunnel without being able to see the daylight...........you could be in another world dear.Nice writes indeed.
This has something, darkpuppet: it's understated, with just enough given so we can feel with you, and want to stand with you, but not so much detail (on what your particular darkness is) that outsiders can't relate to it. Many folk on this site could learn from the way you've crafted this one. Well done!
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 11:10:49 PM # 1.0.0.1119
lol i like very dark, but alot of description..noice