Darkness Poem by Brooke Audino

Darkness

Rating: 2.7


Deeper than the ocean
Alive as the sea
Rainbows of colors do not show
Knowing where they are
Not able to show it's brilliance
Ever more a shadow still it is alive with feeling
Staring, lurching, speaking; it calls to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naida Nepascua Supnet 16 October 2011

i like the interpretation you did for darkness i like the last line when you said it calls out to you you give it a persona and it is symbolic i will vote ten for it,

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Dave Walker 16 October 2011

Great poem. Short and sweet, like it. May i invite you to read my poem called, Shadows of the past.

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