Darkness (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Darkness (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


No stars in the sky
Moon hidden by dark grey clouds
Heavens mourn quake victims

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 02 October 2009

Oh such a sad senryu my friend this reminds me of the people of Indonesia....10/10

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2009

mother earth is the worst sufferer...i too mourn for her!

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Vijay Menon 02 October 2009

darkness spreads gloom the earth tilts putting lives topsy turvy good poem few lines but loaded with good meaning

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 October 2009

a sad one friend....why give an earthquake and feel sad for it too...we would never understand the ways of nature

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Rakesh Bedi 02 October 2009

a commendable three liner, sandra; full of pain, emotions for the sufferers, dear....count me with you, plz....thanks for sharing...

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Raj Nandy 16 October 2009

A TOUCHING TRIBUTE TO THE QUAKE VICTIMS! 10! -Raj

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Sonya Florentino 15 October 2009

of course, they too mourn....everyone...everything mourns! !

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Mamta Agarwal 15 October 2009

nature too mourns... Mamta

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Patti Masterman 14 October 2009

The things of darkness always more unpalatable than those of the light. I like how even the stars must run away, at the hideous sights and sounds.

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Alison Cassidy 13 October 2009

Your powerful words could equally apply to the darkness (like night) described by those who suffered death and homelessness in last February's wild fires in Victoria. It would seem that nature's wrath can be felt in a myriad of guises all over the planet. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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