Daughter Poem by Jacqueline Ellison

Daughter

Rating: 5.0


Hard to believe
You grew up so fast,
Just yesterday
I held you in my arms
And today you are a woman
All grown up.


I was just a kid
When you came along
But never believe
That you were a blunder.

With open eyes
You came into this world
And after sixteen hours
I finally held my prize.

How could you love someone
So much, when we just met?
Life got complicated and
Unfortunately we were separated.

Not a day goes by that
You don't cross my mind.
Now you are a woman
Eager to live your own life.

So I tell you this:
Live life to the fullest,
Love with all your might,
Laugh, cry, make mistakes,
Get back up, No Regrets! !

So when that day comes
And your dance comes
To an end...
You have one hell of
A story to tell.

Thursday, March 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mother daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my daughter on her 18th birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 24 June 2018

Well at least you are not now looking for marks. Sounds and looks like a letter rather than a poem. Read more of the good poems for tips.

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Thank you for reading my poem.

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Beatriz Cobo 19 March 2018

Sigue Adelante con tus publicaciones, eres genial.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 March 2018

Live life to the fullest, Love with all your might, Laugh, cry, make mistakes, Get back up, No Regrets! ! a good mother's advice to the daughter...... very fine description of her heart..... tony

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Asif Andalib 15 March 2018

Awesome! Very well penned. Keep it up

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