Daunting Task Poem by Rini Shibu

Daunting Task

Rating: 5.0


The light from a pinhole
When the room is dark
enough to overcome the daunting task
Step forward and follow the ray
Till you reach the sunny day

Friday, April 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: overcoming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 21 April 2018

Hi Rini Wonderful! Just follow the ray and you have a sunny day! Very positive outlook. Your positivity is contagious. Thank you.

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

Thanks for visiting and posting your feedback

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 April 2018

So lovely, so precise, so briefly you said a ton, Rini! Loved your approach. 10+++++++++++

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Subhas, glad that you like it

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Lamar Cole 20 April 2018

Great poem with great advice to follow.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Lamar for your compliments

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Rini, a poem of precision.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks, glad to read your comment

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such an inspiring poem worthy to mark with a 10+++++

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Bernard, glad that you visiting

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