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(las vegas)


As I sit in low and lonely place
I dream of the one who can light up my face
I hope for him to hold me in his arms
to swear he will always be mine
with every move I take he is there to catch me
wild and free is what his love lets me be
When every guy cause me to cut
or put a bottle in my hand
that when I turn to u,
there something special with u
ur my guardian angel
when I am with u it all ok
I ain't always got to pack up my bags and run again
or so that what it seems
u treat me like nothing else in the world
u cant deny these feeling from a girl
but with u I can talk out my hurt
please tell me our feeling are actually true
because an angel kissed me thanks to u
they opened my heart when I thought it wasn't possible
I need u so much that I cant sleep
and I cant really find the word
your my love and it a miracle
I know u understand
u stole my heartaches
I would give everything for you
y do u love me
for I am so different
for these feeling makes me blind and cant see
I love ur touch and I need to hear u
going without u makes me crazy
ur simply everything magical
I love u

Submitted: Thursday, September 30, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, November 03, 2010

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