Mark R Slaughter (1957)

what an addicting poem is seems to flow nicely
I can see this poem being a huge hit

love this poem =) nice job. Wow it's pretty long

Serene!

Halcyon Poemcrafter

Really a nice poem that expresses a beautiful thought regarding the dawn in a very impressive manner. Of course, the day break like a bride who opens her veil. You've present it in a very simple language but expression is great.

hey...ummmmm...i read this poem again and again but i couldn't understand it......a little help please?

'Dawn blushed; revealed her inner peace;
She handed on another blissful day.
Night ebbed, relenting to release of
Warming blood that gives to her display'

Nature, humanity, human feelings and mans reactions depicted blended upon philosopy and artistic talent.Please read mines too 'antidote' and ' giantsqurrel' somewht similar to your philosophy... dawn..please leave any comment welcome and best of 'blissfull wishes'' for your talents & posts...
sisirachandra vaduge.

nice job! ! ! that really inspires

Cool Poem keep making them! ! !