Water desending down my cheek,
My vision fading to a blur.
My state of mind immensuly weak.
Can't seize the images of her.
Many percious memories,
Simultaneously running through my mind.
Overwhelming the brain,
Like a vicious mind disease,
of an establshed kind.
All emotions are realsed in an explosion,
detaching from your soul.
Become nonexistent,
and crave replenishment,
from the emotions absent that produced a hole.
Conscious practically absent,
body unresponisive,
eating habits insigificent.
defying all hope,
no faith to live on,
candle about to burn out,
Just lingering for the sun to rise at dawn.
A haunting painting of emotions and brought with a wonderful feeling spirit.... Hope you write more................ Thanks for sharing your art Jim Troy
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Impressive! ! ! ! WELCOME TO THE POETRY WORLD! With this heart touching and well penned you have shown to us (the World) your great poetic and creative talent to be welcome with open arms by thousands of poets throughout the World who appreciate wholeheartedly, writes like yours! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more fine writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....