Rookie - 0 Points (30/07/1958 / TRINIDAD and TOBAGO)

Dawn - Poem by ENOCH JOHN

is the Dawn, opening

the book
of a new day

the rainbow
an esplanade, traversing

the sky's rim.

is a blue-like veil
hung in suspense, leaping

day's painted cumuli
and cirrus white-

white as starched linen
or crisp paper

than the green
and regal grass, stalking

the silent hill.

Comments about Dawn by ENOCH JOHN

  • Gold Star - 5,757 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/17/2008 1:01:00 PM)

    Beautifully descriptive and continuously woven til the end.Love it! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shimon Weinroth (9/13/2008 5:17:00 PM)

    lovely poem a harmony of pictures
    I am subjective it is the time of day that i await

    best wishes Shimon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/18/2008 3:10:00 PM)

    ...a fine expression indeed....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 7, 2008

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