Dawn Poem by ENOCH JOHN

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Grey
is the Dawn, opening

the book
of a new day

the rainbow
an esplanade, traversing

the sky's rim.

sky
is a blue-like veil
hung in suspense, leaping

over
day's painted cumuli
and cirrus white-

white as starched linen
or crisp paper

crisper
than the green
and regal grass, stalking

the silent hill.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautifully descriptive and continuously woven til the end.Love it! ! ! ! ! !

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Shimon Weinroth 13 September 2008

lovely poem a harmony of pictures I am subjective it is the time of day that i await best wishes Shimon

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2008

...a fine expression indeed....10

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