ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,601 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Dawn and Dusk of my life


Each dawn of my life
brings a new ray of sun
with a new hope of creativity
for sagacious activities of my life

Aroma of each dawn
astound me, widen all notches of my life
fullfil my days with highest peak of sun

Each dusk of my life
brings skyful flower
twilighting over my head
to sprinkle their fragrance
and the moon with coldness of rhymes
for congestion of my attribite
to sip the melofy of rhymes

Submitted: Sunday, September 08, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (10/27/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    Lovely thought, just keep on. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (10/7/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    celebrating each day passing by. great poem. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,039 Points Hazel Durham (9/13/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    I love this superb write with beautiful lines that are mesmerizing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,538 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/12/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Dawn brings new life and dusk a skyful of satisfaction. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/9/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem..When each dawn and dusk fill life with brightness, thereby keeping away darkness. How much a wonderful life would be..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (9/8/2013 11:34:00 PM)

    When the dawn and dusk of each day are brightened up in this way, the whole life gets lit up! This is a lovely write! Enjoyed your son's poem on the Teacher's Day! Thanks for downloading It! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (9/8/2013 7:04:00 PM)

    aroma of each dawn astound me when all notches of my life fulfill my days lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (9/8/2013 2:48:00 PM)

    As I say, we are here on this earth to learn by going through lessons. Your words are telling what is in your soul. Keep on writing. What we write, we have to air out our brain, that way we can remember more the meanings, what we are talking about.
    You are right one has to born to be a poet or a writer. (Report) Reply

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