Dawn And Dusk Of My Life Poem by ramesh rai

Dawn And Dusk Of My Life

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Each dawn of my life
brings a new ray of sun
with a new hope of creativity
for sagacious activities of my life

Aroma of each dawn
astound me, widen all notches of my life
fullfil my days with highest peak of sun

Each dusk of my life
brings skyful flower
twilighting over my head
to sprinkle their fragrance
and the moon with coldness of rhymes
for congestion of my attribite
to sip the melofy of rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 September 2013

When the dawn and dusk of each day are brightened up in this way, the whole life gets lit up! This is a lovely write! Enjoyed your son's poem on the Teacher's Day! Thanks for downloading It!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 08 September 2013

As I say, we are here on this earth to learn by going through lessons. Your words are telling what is in your soul. Keep on writing. What we write, we have to air out our brain, that way we can remember more the meanings, what we are talking about. You are right one has to born to be a poet or a writer.

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Heather Wilkins 08 September 2013

aroma of each dawn astound me when all notches of my life fulfill my days lovely write

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 October 2013

Lovely thought, just keep on.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 07 October 2013

celebrating each day passing by. great poem. :)

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Hazel Durham 13 September 2013

I love this superb write with beautiful lines that are mesmerizing!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2013

Dawn brings new life and dusk a skyful of satisfaction. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 September 2013

Beautiful poem..When each dawn and dusk fill life with brightness, thereby keeping away darkness. How much a wonderful life would be..Loved reading it.

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