Day By Day. Poem by Unforgiven Secrets

Day By Day.

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As the days go by i wonder who will i be
As i wonder as the days go by who will i see
i continue this path of wondering
how hard can it be

i remain trying to figure out my future
but wondering about my future can ruin me
i should live my days in the present
because its these days who help me
be who i want to be

so insted of letting the future
get to me
i will travel and finish and let it
go by days by days of who i will be.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am inspired by the days of the week i worry to much of who i will be. Even if i made mistakes i will never regret them nomater what.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 16 December 2014

A famous quotation I know... Yesterday was history. Tomorrow is mystery. Today is a gift, that is why it is called present. Your poem I think expresses this theme. I enjoyed reading. And a friendly advice: The more you search the less you'll find about conceptual things in life. Let life go the way it goes. Try not to interpret it the way your mind does. Try to accept it is a fact. I'd be glad to know your comments and ideas about my works. Good Luck

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Dillon Tarr 25 August 2013

This is a really lovely poem!

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