Day Dream Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Day Dream

Rating: 2.8


The desire and goal
Certainly wants honest call
Hard work and determination
Strong resolve with indication

Nothing wring in having desire
On the contrary it is thing to admires
Person is nothing without future
He must work in direction and ensure

Day dream won’t work
That has to be matched with words
People may want action with result
Or get ready to face the insult

World wants swing
No scope for strangulation with ring
It wants quick result with orientation
Strong bid with result in rotation

Success may have different story
It is essential and necessary
You should smile with satisfaction
People may follow you without contradiction

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

Aggressive society Jeston Froehlich4 minutes ago Love the line hard work determination.. resolve w indication. Pretty much sums it up.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 February 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome JaiRam Tiwari and Maricela Ramírez like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

The desire and goal Certainly wants honest call

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

nice Bailey LaFleur7 minutes ago it's great! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

Idealistic Agnes Bain3 minutes ago The writer appears to tell the reader of the qualities and ideals he sees in life. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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