Scotty Dogg

Rookie - 72 Points (Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

Day Dreaming At Work


On a snowy canvas, I splashed her
down with bare, brown, freckled
shoulders. With mirrors everywhere,
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Topic of this poem: fashion


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  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (11/8/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    ... enjoyed reading it nicee.... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,525 Points Bri Edwards (10/11/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    dog? sex? ? ? ? ? i can't say i love this, or that it is beautiful or very lush or gorgeous. purple fists? ? ?

    autumn of her thighs? ....chicken thighs? and the mirrors is the topper. are you sure this is day dreaming or could it be a night dream? i'm really befuddled. but thanks for sharing, i think. does your boss know what you are up to, or are you the boss? on to the next one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ellen Shaw (8/19/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    Simply beautiful. I love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aria Siren (5/28/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    this poem is very lush. beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Brooke Loring (4/25/2013 6:22:00 PM)

    gorgeous...................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Michael Oliver (2/23/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    admire the imagery of the 'autumn of her thighs' wish i had thought of that one (Report) Reply

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