Day's Test Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Day's Test

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I was sleepless in night
The feeling too was not right
There was complete gloom and unhappiness
I could see it in morning and trace

The sun made me to rethink
There is no reason to sink
Let there be thousand worries
We should never surrender and carry

I thought about sun and light
How was it coming to our delight?
Whole of the universe depended upon
Living and non living bowed to sun’s crown

Whole day seemed to be shining example
How were we uselessly spending it with struggle?
It was just a chance to live with expectation
Just unique bond with lively connection

Such nice shine comes to an end
Evening approaches as cool friend
Moon spreads its silvery light
We all enjoy in stars delight

Silence in night prevails
All worries attack but fail
Mind comes to rest
For another day’s test

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

I was sleepless in night The feeling too was not right

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Willy Cantara14 minutes ago your in a battle that will repeat each day, we as you all have our battles may the sun shine and lead us on our way.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Jessa99 wow, this is simple beauty! love it, keep on writing! ~

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

leafsailor A man at peace with himself and the mystery sleeps so well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

great Ms. Mei Mei G14 minutes ago nice Comment 0 Excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Skoshi Ne15 minutes ago Beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Suzanne Lionaar14 minutes ago I like the rhyming and the flow Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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