John Hazon Palen

Rookie - 0 Points (February 3,1995 / Philippines)

Daydreamer - Poem by John Hazon Palen

I am on the passenger side,
Daydreaming to the sky
The day's bright and full of life.. then
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Comments about Daydreamer by John Hazon Palen

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/15/2013 12:29:00 AM)

    John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/15/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    John Hazon Palen i loved your poem. you should have approached her buddy. just as two poems are never alike, two bus rides..... hey dont miss the next time please. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points John Hazon Palen (3/16/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Thank you, everyone! ; ')
    God bless! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (3/16/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Nice poem to ponder, great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenna Chryste (3/15/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    this happened to me yesterday except the person beside me woke me up :) i'm still a kid, yes, and am in high school - me and my daydreams :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Varna Soyakaze (3/15/2012 12:39:00 AM)

    Very good poem.
    Reminds me of one of my experiences.
    The passenger's lucky enough to talk to someone who would write a poem on her. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,397 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/15/2012 12:07:00 AM)

    Good poem, John; keep writing and sharing! You were lucky to find this co-passenger just as interested... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kody Pound (3/14/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    That's a great Poem! You got talent kid. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 64 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/2/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, i really enjoy it) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amatulla Mohammadi (2/16/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    a nicely written poem :) (Report) Reply








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