Days And Minutes Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Days And Minutes

Rating: 3.2


Counting the days to past
Until I forgotten, at last
The pain which is still fresh
Hurting me ravagely, flesh to flesh

It’s 19th of August
To overcome, it’s all I cost
Living behind my lost
Truth of third party kills me almost

I do visitation
And your lovely recitation
That you’d love me wholly
But you left me in the streets lonely

I still keep the letters
And your promises, it matters
Still, I read it, madly
Coz it reminds me of you sadly

Counting the minutes to pass
Coz I wanted to sleep, to last
And to dream, you and me
In our sweet and bliss moment, we’ll be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juvela Obi 15 February 2010

this is intriguing. I don't know the exact meaning of the poem, but I can definitely sense the emotions in it. well written, if you write with the same goals I do.8/10

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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

what is a promise...but a misconception of the one at the other end...reminders are sometimes painful...but be glad...not sad...understanding is a wise tool...

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