Days Of Blues Poem by Diplove gautam

Days Of Blues

Rating: 4.8


Foggy days spreaded, with the frozen stream.
We lost the bread, and had no cream.
Empty store, dead plants neither was day clear.
Life at nightmare, nothing at all left to share.
Deer fled of fear, no fauna neither any creature near.
Pot full of tears, Mere chance of life here.
No help, do it ownself, no way out and clues.
Lost nowhere here, but in days of blues.

Lights off, frozen everywhere, we had no fire.
No life, traveled miles still no sign of tire.
Howling jackels, fearless hyena, its hard to run.
Summer time, beautiful shore, we had great fun.
Flying birds, wild woods, we saw witch huts.
We were tired, its surest we had no guts.
No help, do ownself, no way out and clues.
Lost nowhere here, but in days of blues

Later it was a day, that night we slept in hay.
No sunrise, no one else to advice, how to save our life.
Thirsty neck, all over ice, water in small pipe kept us alive.
Unrest mind, nature so unkind, on the day today.
No one could say, was that day surely my last day.
No help, do ownself, no way out and clues.
Lost nowhere but in days of blues
lost nowhere but in days of blues.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ojaswee Das 16 September 2015

Wow...this is a really great poem..u rock

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Diplove Gautam 05 June 2011

thank you MR Mohd...good graces to all of us....

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 June 2011

Great poem with brilliant imagery and wonderful style. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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